Returning Player, New List and No Idea what works! 1850 list

[lofwyrkp]

Hi,

The last time I played 40K was during the Eye of Terror campaign, when I had a Lost and the Damned guard army. So a while ago

I'm a long time skaven fan and had created a LatD army list that was heavily converted to represent skaven in 40k. With that in mind, I'd like to recreate something similar, something that is fun to play, but at the same time somewhat competitive.

My friends and I are starting a campaign to kick start our return to 40k so I'll probably be facing Necron, Eldar and Tyranids.

Onto the list.

HQ

Pask + Pinisher with lascannon and multimeltas, and camo

Excecutioner with lascannon and multimelta and camo

Total                                                                                     455

CCS, + vox, 1 melta, astropath and chimera                             160

2 x Primaris Psykers, lvl 2                                                        150

Troops

Vet Squad + vox, 3xMelta, Forward Detachment

Vet Squad + vox, 3xMelta, Forward Detachment

Total                                                                                      210

PCS + Vox

3 x Troops, each with Autocanon and Plasma Gun                      275

Elite

2 x Tempestus each with 2 x Melta                                            180

Fast Attack

Bane Wolf + Dozer                                                                   135

Heavy

Deathstrike + camo                                                                  175

Total                                                                                      1740

In case anyone wonders, the psykers are the grey seers, leman russes are clan skyre, the bane wolf is clan pestelens, the troops are clan rats and the tempestus are night runners tunnelling up and the deathstrike is such a crazy weapon, only the skaven would take it lol

Right, sorry for rambling, but I've 110 points spare.

Any thoughts? criticisms? or general ideas on how to make this list work

Many thanks for getting this far

Heavy

[aluwihar]

Very close combat oriented list. I love the theme. Do you have pictures?

[Paradill]

I love it. It's not a style you see very often and it's very in your face.

I think it might take a little while to "get it right" and start winning matches but with a list like this you're gonna have fun no matter what.

[lofwyrkp]

Work is crazy busy atm, but I'll see what photo's I can upload on Wed

Many thanks for the words of encouragement

[lofwyrkp]

Seems my pictures aren't the best, but for what they're worth I've attached 3, a leman russ, a sentinel and some obliterators

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[aluwihar]

Haha, great stuff! Now to make an allied detachment of ratmarine ogres! The horned rat protects!