Post by beaviz81 on Nov 17, 2013 14:35:52 GMT -5
Just my fiction about the Warhammer 40.000 universe taking place on the death-world of Freudakia, a place once of lush jungles and such, but now increasingly under the thumb of the industrial planet Ciralix and the Adeptus Mechanicus due to the planet's riches in mineral wealth. Freudakia is a Deathworld were camouflage is everything while visibility means exposure and plain death even the commissars have learned that lesson and embraced it with camo-cloaks and other items of misdirection.
The Emperor's Blood.
Chapter I
The Catachans was stealthily taking up positions in the Freudakian jungle. The hunt for the dreaded warboss Draznob had gone on for quite a while. The losses had been astonishing on both sides, yet they knew even as they sat up their position they were likely doing their last ambush as they were low on anything. Many of the heavy weapons were without ammunition or had simply been overused and had malfunctioned. Even their simple lasguns was starting to show an immense wear and tear.
Even so the battle in the jungle was imminent, a huge horde of Orks were swarming in on their position. Colonel James Stremm gave his last commands. The Ogryn-sized big-jawed fellow with greyish crew-cut and huge muscles even for a Catachan retrieved his Heavy-Bolter Big Bertha for the final time loading it with the run-strap magazines and exited the camouflaged tent.
The Orks came swarming at the thin Imperial line, booby-traps and precise lasgun-fire leveled the first wave. The second wave was of tougher more heavily armed Orks. They shrugged off any but the best placed lasgun-shots. Even Big Bertha had problems whittling down the members of the Warboss’ retinue that slowly was charging towards his squad, having already cut a platoon to ribbons.
Two of the creatures were remaining charging towards Stremm and his bodyguards. He resigned himself to his fate looking at the immense Warboss, yet a shadow intervened. The head of the closest Ork Nob came flying off, the body just ran off in a random direction, before it stumbled at some sandbags having no virtual control of how it ran around anymore just like chickens getting beheaded. While the head continued to insult Stremm who merely stomped on it to shut it up.
The shadow revealed itself. It was a fine looking young commissar, clad all in blackish, the suit blended so well in with the shadows even the Catachans hadn’t seen him until now. Yet he was in serious trouble because right behind him towered an Ork Warboss of epic proportions. “Another scumsucker bites the dust.” The commissar voiced it with gratification like he weren’t aware of the threat right behind him.
“How but me ooomie!?” A snarling gurgling voice said behind the man, who miraculously managed to deflect the Power Klaw-blow with his chainsword, and managed to make it whistle past him, just barely grazing the black armour. The commissar immediately pounced striking at the Power Klaw, disabling it. Yet the freed ork-hand slammed the commissar into the nearest Freudakian hardwood.
“That you shouldn’t have done!” The commissar roared just as the ork tried to raise his kombi-flamer to him. He was faster, the hissing meltagun immediately disabled the weapon and vaporized the arm of the ork. Yet the commissar made his first mistake in the duel buoyed up by seeing an easy kill, he ran closer to the Warboss roaring: “Now you die you beast!” He pulled the trigger but a forcefield erupted around the Warboss neutralizing the blast.
The one-armed bandit didn’t let an opportunity go from him and pounced at the commissar who for once reacted too slow and got bodyslammed. He grabbed the meltagun of the struggling human and tore it off the chains, but as he did he felt a sting in his arm. The commissar had from his jacket-sleeves brandished two monofilament-knives. Reacting quickly Draznob kicked away the flailing man before the second arm was taken away.
He saw the man smash into a large pine making it sway. A spider-monkey immediately landed at his right shoulder, he tossed it straight at Draznob, who caught and squashed it mid-air. Next he felt a burning pain in his remaining shoulder and saw two poisoned knives the commissar doubtless had hidden in his black eupalets. Just as he sped towards the huge ork, brandishing two new knives. The commissar jumped on Draznob with cat-like grace, all intent on finishing the job despite substantial injuries inside of him.
The knives slashed at the throat of the Ork as the commissar tried to avoid the huge fist of Draznob. It got him. It clenched hard around the struggling human. It was not enough for Draznob he was intent to finish this man once and for all, he bit after him, but a surprising head-butt from the human brought the eye of Draznob into finger-distance of him. He slammed home an armoured finger tearing right into the eye it hard, hard metal tore into the soft tissue of the eye. The pain made Draznob ease his hold of the commissar who then got up his Uplifting Primer from inside his greatcoat.
That he brutally showed into the other eye, then came the las-chisel up, it was ignited. Draznob stopped. He stood there as a statue just leaning, with a burning small book inside his skull.
The commissar was anything but graceful now as he with a big goofy grin stumbled towards the Catachans, knowing full and well they likely would just butcher him for his trouble of saving the command-squad. He giggled like a small boy watching an Ogryn firing a Heavy Bolter in the distance, he knew his wounds were mortal.
He finally fell stumbling at an exposed root he dead-drunk wouldn’t hit. He now tried to think about the Emperor. Instead visions of his life flashed before him. He saw his proud tutors at the Schola, how he himself advanced to become one, he saw his friends, he saw the good times and most of all he saw his fiance.
Infact he saw only her as he landed face down in a puddle of mud, no more than an inch or two deep. He laid there dreaming letting go of life just seeing her sweet face. He knew he should focus on the Emperor yet her lure were stronger. He passed out trying to whisper her name with his last breath.
The Emperor's Blood.
Chapter I
The Catachans was stealthily taking up positions in the Freudakian jungle. The hunt for the dreaded warboss Draznob had gone on for quite a while. The losses had been astonishing on both sides, yet they knew even as they sat up their position they were likely doing their last ambush as they were low on anything. Many of the heavy weapons were without ammunition or had simply been overused and had malfunctioned. Even their simple lasguns was starting to show an immense wear and tear.
Even so the battle in the jungle was imminent, a huge horde of Orks were swarming in on their position. Colonel James Stremm gave his last commands. The Ogryn-sized big-jawed fellow with greyish crew-cut and huge muscles even for a Catachan retrieved his Heavy-Bolter Big Bertha for the final time loading it with the run-strap magazines and exited the camouflaged tent.
The Orks came swarming at the thin Imperial line, booby-traps and precise lasgun-fire leveled the first wave. The second wave was of tougher more heavily armed Orks. They shrugged off any but the best placed lasgun-shots. Even Big Bertha had problems whittling down the members of the Warboss’ retinue that slowly was charging towards his squad, having already cut a platoon to ribbons.
Two of the creatures were remaining charging towards Stremm and his bodyguards. He resigned himself to his fate looking at the immense Warboss, yet a shadow intervened. The head of the closest Ork Nob came flying off, the body just ran off in a random direction, before it stumbled at some sandbags having no virtual control of how it ran around anymore just like chickens getting beheaded. While the head continued to insult Stremm who merely stomped on it to shut it up.
The shadow revealed itself. It was a fine looking young commissar, clad all in blackish, the suit blended so well in with the shadows even the Catachans hadn’t seen him until now. Yet he was in serious trouble because right behind him towered an Ork Warboss of epic proportions. “Another scumsucker bites the dust.” The commissar voiced it with gratification like he weren’t aware of the threat right behind him.
“How but me ooomie!?” A snarling gurgling voice said behind the man, who miraculously managed to deflect the Power Klaw-blow with his chainsword, and managed to make it whistle past him, just barely grazing the black armour. The commissar immediately pounced striking at the Power Klaw, disabling it. Yet the freed ork-hand slammed the commissar into the nearest Freudakian hardwood.
“That you shouldn’t have done!” The commissar roared just as the ork tried to raise his kombi-flamer to him. He was faster, the hissing meltagun immediately disabled the weapon and vaporized the arm of the ork. Yet the commissar made his first mistake in the duel buoyed up by seeing an easy kill, he ran closer to the Warboss roaring: “Now you die you beast!” He pulled the trigger but a forcefield erupted around the Warboss neutralizing the blast.
The one-armed bandit didn’t let an opportunity go from him and pounced at the commissar who for once reacted too slow and got bodyslammed. He grabbed the meltagun of the struggling human and tore it off the chains, but as he did he felt a sting in his arm. The commissar had from his jacket-sleeves brandished two monofilament-knives. Reacting quickly Draznob kicked away the flailing man before the second arm was taken away.
He saw the man smash into a large pine making it sway. A spider-monkey immediately landed at his right shoulder, he tossed it straight at Draznob, who caught and squashed it mid-air. Next he felt a burning pain in his remaining shoulder and saw two poisoned knives the commissar doubtless had hidden in his black eupalets. Just as he sped towards the huge ork, brandishing two new knives. The commissar jumped on Draznob with cat-like grace, all intent on finishing the job despite substantial injuries inside of him.
The knives slashed at the throat of the Ork as the commissar tried to avoid the huge fist of Draznob. It got him. It clenched hard around the struggling human. It was not enough for Draznob he was intent to finish this man once and for all, he bit after him, but a surprising head-butt from the human brought the eye of Draznob into finger-distance of him. He slammed home an armoured finger tearing right into the eye it hard, hard metal tore into the soft tissue of the eye. The pain made Draznob ease his hold of the commissar who then got up his Uplifting Primer from inside his greatcoat.
That he brutally showed into the other eye, then came the las-chisel up, it was ignited. Draznob stopped. He stood there as a statue just leaning, with a burning small book inside his skull.
The commissar was anything but graceful now as he with a big goofy grin stumbled towards the Catachans, knowing full and well they likely would just butcher him for his trouble of saving the command-squad. He giggled like a small boy watching an Ogryn firing a Heavy Bolter in the distance, he knew his wounds were mortal.
He finally fell stumbling at an exposed root he dead-drunk wouldn’t hit. He now tried to think about the Emperor. Instead visions of his life flashed before him. He saw his proud tutors at the Schola, how he himself advanced to become one, he saw his friends, he saw the good times and most of all he saw his fiance.
Infact he saw only her as he landed face down in a puddle of mud, no more than an inch or two deep. He laid there dreaming letting go of life just seeing her sweet face. He knew he should focus on the Emperor yet her lure were stronger. He passed out trying to whisper her name with his last breath.