First Time Army List Advice Please

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I am aiming for an All comers list? Also a bit concerned about cc (scorpions, Hawks, Scouts)

I am over by 109 pts What do you advise i remove, its looking like i should remove all sentinels leaving me 93pts free.

I could convert Omega platoon in to a stand or shoot rather than a drop unit and add an extra squad to the omega platoon?

Do i keep it stand and shoot or Drop?....Whats Recommended?

IMPERIAL GUARDS - Cadian7th 2609pts

Doctrines:
Iron Discipline
Close Order Drill
Drop Troop
Veteran

=HQ=
Command Platoon (HQ)
4 Command Squad (2 Guardsman, 1 Veteran), 2w/Las Cannon Squad, 1w/Plasma Gun; Vet w/Las Gun, & 1 Heroic Senior Officer w/Iron Discipline & Las Pistol, Vet w/Las Gun & Standard Bearer, @ 116pts +Commissar Las Pistol & CCW @40pts

Anti Tank Squad #1 @ 110pts
6 Guardsmen in 3 Las Cannon Squads

Anti Tank Squad #2 @ 110pts
6 Guardsmen in 3 Las Cannon Squads

Fire Support Squad #3 @ 80pts
6 Guardsmen in 3 Heavy Bolter Squads

Fire Support Squad #4 @ 80pts
6 Guardsmen in 3 Heavy Bolter Squads

Sentinel Support Squadron (Drop) @ 73pts
Sentinel w/Las Cannon, HKM, SMK

=ELITE= (Drop)
9-Veterans-135 pts
3 with Melta Guns
6w/ Shotguns
1 Sergeant with Power Fist & Bolt Pistol

6-Veterans-135 pts
3 with Melta Guns
6w/ Las Guns
1 Sergeant with Power Fist & Bolt Pistol

6-Veterans-135 pts
3 with Melta Guns
6w/Las Guns
1 Sergeant with Power Fist & Las Pistol

=TROOPS=
Alfa Infantry Platoon (Troops)
5 Command Squad, 3w/Las Gun, 1w/Plasma Gun;
1 Junior Officer w/Iron Discipline Honorifica Imperialis & Las pistol, CCW @ 75pts

9 Infantry Squad #1 @ 95pts
2 Guardsmen w/Las Cannon Squad, 1 Guardsman w/Plasma Gun, 6 Guardsmen w/Las Guns. + Sergeant w/Las Gun,

9 Infantry Squad #2 @ 85pts
2 Guardsmen w/Auto Cannon Squad, 1 Guardsman w/Plasma Gun, 6 Guardsmen w/Las Guns. + Sergeant w/Las Gun,

9 Infantry Squad #3 @ 85pts
2 Guardsmen w/Auto Cannon Squad, 1 Guardsman w/Plasma Gun, 6 Guardsmen w/Las Guns. + Sergeant w/Las Gun,

9 Infantry Squad #4 @ 78pts
2 Guardsmen w/Heavy Bolter Squad, 1 Guardsman w/Grenade Launcher, 6 Guardsmen w/Las Guns. + Sergeant w/Las Gun,

Beta Infantry Platoon (Troops)
5 Command Squad, 2Las Guns, 2w/Plasma Gun, 1 Junior Officer w/Iron Discipline, & Las pistol, CCW @ 88pts

9 Infantry Squad #1 @ 95pts
2 Guardsmen w/Las Cannon Squad, 1 Guardsman w/Plasma Gun, 6 Guardsmen w/Las Guns. + Sergeant w/Las Gun,

9 Infantry Squad #2 @ 85pts
2 Guardsmen w/Auto Cannon Squad, 1 Guardsman w/Plasma Gun, 6 Guardsmen w/Las Guns. + Sergeant w/Las Gun,

9 Infantry Squad #3 @ 85pts
2 Guardsmen w/Auto Cannon Squad, 1 Guardsman w/Plasma Gun, 6 Guardsmen w/Las Guns. + Sergeant w/Las Gun,

9 Infantry Squad #4 @ 78pts
2 Guardsmen w/Heavy Bolter Squad, 1 Guardsman w/Grenade Launcher, 6 Guardsmen w/Las Guns. + Sergeant w/Las Gun,

Omega Infantry Platoon (Troops) (Drop)
5 Command Squad, 1w/Las Gun, 3w/Flamers
1 Junior Officer w/Iron Discipline & Las pistol, CCC @ 64pts

9 Infantry Squad #1 @ 91 pts
2 Guardsmen w/Missile Launcher Squad, 1 Guardsman w/Plasma Gun, 6 Guardsmen w/Las Guns. + Vet Sergeant w/Las Gun,

9 Infantry Squad #2@ 76 pts
1 Guardsman w/Plasma Gun, 8 Guardsmen w/Las Guns. +Vet Sergeant w/Las Gun,

9 Infantry Squad #3 @ 76 pts
1 Guardsman w/Plasma Gun, 8 Guardsmen w/Las Guns. +Vet Sergeant w/Las Gun,

=FAST ATTACK=
Sentinel w/Heavy Flamer, SMK @43pts
Sentinel w/Heavy Flamer, SMK @43pts
Sentinel w/Heavy Flamer, SMK @43pts

=HEAVY SUPPORT=
Leman Russ Battle Tank, Hull Mounted HB, Sponsoons pair HB@ 155pts
Leman Russ Battle Tank, Hull Mounted HB, Sponsoons pair HB@ 155pts

[Mabus]

keep the sentinels they will add some well needed mobility to the army, more than that I can't say!

[twerd]

This is your first list? keep it small at first and delevope it from there you have to learn the poetitail of a guardsmen first (i haven't yet)

[thefishki345]

good list, very troop heavy which is good, but might I suggest dropping the doctrines just to get the feel for the army (I dont use doctrines as I have only played like 4 games) and like twerd said keep it small at first.

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drop the commissar, i know he's just in there for the fluff, i do it too, but without the powerweapon at least he's not worth it.

and that heavy weapon for those drop troops.
i find that it's a waste of points for those 2 shots yer gonna make when you drop them. thats just 1 hit for single shot weapons. not worth the points.
also, lose yer vet's in the basic squads, you've got yer officers for leadership, and that 1 xtra attack isn't gonna help ya vs most armies. you wanna shoot the enemy, not get stuck in combat, even if they drop.

furthermore you can drop the smoke for your sentinels, you will be deepstriking them anyways. (yes you will, trust me). this means you will flame the enemy, smoke isn't gonna help you do that.

well i guess that's about 110 points i think, with only losing a single model.
oh and you wont get yerself killed for failing that ld test. (not that your gonna, i hope)