My 1000 point guard army. Please evaluate

[Rolling Thunder]

I'll take you all on!!

1000 point all-comers IG list.

Andrei Jageruakov's Mercanery Guard

Fluff: There are entire armies of mercanies that ply their trade in the 41st millienium. One of the most dangerous is the mercanery unit Dragon, under the command of Field Marshall Kamenev Drang. This loosely sffiliated association hires out by the level of itself as a standing army for entire campaigns down to squad level for training/special ops work purposes. Captain Andrei Jaguerakov is one of the mid-level commanders in this force, and is currently operating under the command of Field Marshall Drang in the employ of the Govenor of Cheiftans Bane in the defence of the planet from renegade marines of the Night Lords Legion. So far, they are winning. Ha Ha Ha.


Doctrines
Drop Troops
Carapace armour
Iron Discipline
Combat engineers (spec weapons teams)
Cameoline.


HQ

Control Platoon Dragon
HSO, Captain Andrei Jaguerakov. Power Weapon, plasma pistol, Iron Discipline. (90)
2 Plasma Rifles, 1 Meltagun. (120)
Veteran Medic (131)
Carapace. (151)

Spec. weapons Team Loki (186)
2 flamethrowers, 1 Demo charge ( 214)

Spec. weapons Team Zulu (249)
2 Flamers, 1 Demo charge. (277)

Troops

Platoon Werewolf.

JO, Hans von Guderein. Iron disicpline, Power sword, Bolt pistol. (328)
Lascannon team, meltagun specialist. (363)
Carapace: (395)

Squad Broadsword. (443)
Autocannon, Plasma rifle (468)
Camo (478)

Squad Spatha (538)
Rocket-propelled charge, grenade launcher. (561)
Camo (541)

Platoon Wyvern

JO Yuri Gagarin, Iron Discipline, Power sword, Bolt pistol (622)
Lascannon team, meltagun specialist. ( 657)
Carapace (677)

Squad Longspear (737)
Heavy Bolter, Plasma rifle (757)
Camo (779)

Squad Javelin(827)
Rocket team, grenade launcher (840)
Camo(850)

Heavy support

Leman Russ Battle tank Winston (990)
Lascannon Hull mount (1005)

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Hi, interesting list but whats with the obsecenly over exaggerated points calculation for each unit? Anyway the platoons are at a good size. I like your fluff and i know that special weapon teams are a must but to be brutally honest they are not the most effective units. With your doctrines i think carapace armour is way to expensive in a 1000pt list. Camoline is more cost effective and when used right is as good as carapce. Being honest again your army setup is not designed around Drop Troops, if you wan't to keep to your fluff and you want to use Drop Troops you should take Grenadiers and the platoons should be filled with flamers. Iron discipline is an absolutely brilliant doctrine and should always be taken. Hope this is helpful and try playing round with various combinations. I recommend looking at other Drop Troop armylists.

[Rolling Thunder]

The 'points calculation' is actually a running total of the points cost. And yes, I will be dropping the carapace armour doc and maybe taking another, like something. Thankyou for the advice.

And by the way, grenadiers can't deepstrike whatsoever. They can't use it as elites stormtroopers, and the doctrine entry specifies ' any guard infantry or sentinal unit', and grenaniders are not guard infantry.

The whole drop troops thing is just a backup in case I need to do some objective grabbing

[Rolling Thunder]

C'mon people, a little help would be nice! i have to get this amry together in time for january and the purchasing alone is gonna cost me a fortune!!!!!