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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2007 23:08:03 GMT -5
+++vox message recording recovered at veersteldt's point, Cynthia prime+++ +++Voice match: Captain 1298273, Tainer, Kel+++
(The message is garbled and warped, but the voice is clear through the din of battle)
" We've been hit pretty hard here! They've boxed us off from the escape route, and were pinned down in the manufactora point 0-6-5-7, were trying to proceed back to company HQ"
(voice cut off by explosion, temporarily drowning out und in message)
" damnit! The line is breached! we need reinforcements to manufactora point 0-6-5-7, repeat manufactora point 0-6-5-7 at sector 8-G. Company B reporting huge casua ---(message cut )--- need reinforcements no----------------(message cut )---------------
(sounds of las-fire and bolter rounds overtake cast, voice lost) Note: At this point in the cast we can assume that the chaotic bombardment that was unleashed upon sector 8-G of Hive Veersteldt was unleashed at this point of the cast. We then recieve a more stressed garbled message---
(Distant explosions and rumbling in the backround)
"(cough) This...is....captain Kel Tainer requesting reinforce.......ments, (cough), to Manufactora sector 8-G, Repeat...."-----------Message lost-----------
Note: Hive veersteldt was a battleground where over 10000 guardmen lost thier lives, with over 4000 of which dying at the battle for sector 8-G, and Comany's B, G, and H being completly wiped out. This message was given to regimental HQ at Veersteldt but was ignored due to lack of tactical priority
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Post by Cadian 117 on Aug 13, 2007 21:59:20 GMT -5
hmmm........Im confused but i think I am supposed to be right?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 16, 2007 23:09:15 GMT -5
ya, your supposed to have to read it a couple of times to see what is happening lol this was kinda an unorthodox experiment in my writing so if it sucks just tell me (nicely).
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Post by Cadian 117 on Aug 17, 2007 15:29:44 GMT -5
No man its good i like when people start with vox messages ravaged by explosions and gunfire. I loves it!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2007 22:41:04 GMT -5
awsome, ill make another then
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Post by Cadian 117 on Aug 18, 2007 23:06:21 GMT -5
YAY
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Post by Mabus on Aug 19, 2007 4:53:49 GMT -5
Stop spamming Cadian! Nice story though.
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Post by twerd on Aug 24, 2007 4:17:59 GMT -5
he Wasn't spaming
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Post by Cadian 117 on Sept 3, 2007 21:27:20 GMT -5
uh......thanks! No really it is very good I like a mysterious beggining and so should you!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2007 11:31:13 GMT -5
Well done
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